I think that technology and medecine will be principally in evolution. Maybe we'll find a remedy against the AIDS or the cancer. We had so many progrest before, so why not ? It would be good and I hope for the futur generation !!
I think like them, the high technology will be better than now. It will continue to evolue and to make better our life. I think that energies and the electrics cars will represent our future too.
Technology will be a part of our life . Perhaps we could not be able to do anythings without it . Furthermore , religious will be more important than now and everyone would show his appartenance in a forme of religious , indeed links between the various communities will be conflicted . However , i believe that inequality would be solved because the growth of western countries would be going to slow down while the growth of developing countries would be increase .
"I agree with them, high technology....." "to make our life better..." "electric cars...." "Perhaps we will not be able to do anything" (anything without "s")" "religion will be" "everyone will show their memberships where religion is concerned" links will be conflictual/conflicting I believe .......will be.......western countries' development will(may) decrease..... (will & not would)
Our generation is accustomed to live with new technologies . We know all about new technologies such as game ( playstation , WII ...) computer ( Brands , performance ... ) and others . Nowadays TV and radio are less used by new generation compared to computer and mobile . So to my mind the most important new technology is the Mobile . Nowadays most of people have a mobile , but for new generation it's not a need but a way to be fashionable . Every young people want to have the new Blackberry or the new Iphone .It's convenient , customizable and changeable . Moreover all phones have an Internet connection , so people can all be connected at every moment . One of the most important things with a mobile is the SMS . No need to call . It's fast , take less time and it is discreet . Other things : you can listen music . all a users need could be in his phone : Adress , music , games ... The mobile is the most important new technology because it allows us to be connected at any time any place .
"be accustomed to doing sth" or "be accustomed to light etc" "most people have a mobile" "Every young teenager wants" "have Internet connection" "listen to music" "all you need is on your mobile" "address"
The high-technology I think.
ReplyDeleteThe evolution of humanity is very amazing.
I think that someone will change the world.
I think technology is highest evolution
ReplyDeleteI think that technology and medecine will be principally in evolution.
ReplyDeleteMaybe we'll find a remedy against the AIDS or the cancer. We had so many progrest before, so why not ?
It would be good and I hope for the futur generation !!
against AIDS or cancer...... There has been progress in .....
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I think like them, the high technology will be better than now. It will continue to evolue and to make better our life. I think that energies and the electrics cars will represent our future too.
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ReplyDeleteTechnology will be a part of our life . Perhaps we could not be able to do anythings without it .
ReplyDeleteFurthermore , religious will be more important than now and everyone would show his appartenance in a forme of religious , indeed links between the various communities will be conflicted .
However , i believe that inequality would be solved because the growth of western countries would be going to slow down while the growth of developing countries would be increase .
"I agree with them, high technology....."
ReplyDelete"to make our life better..."
"electric cars...."
"Perhaps we will not be able to do anything" (anything without "s")"
"religion will be"
"everyone will show their memberships where religion is concerned" links will be conflictual/conflicting
I believe .......will be.......western countries' development will(may) decrease..... (will & not would)
Be careful "modal + be + past participle"
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ReplyDeleteOur generation is accustomed to live with new technologies . We know all about new technologies such as game ( playstation , WII ...) computer ( Brands , performance ... ) and others . Nowadays TV and radio are less used by new generation compared to computer and mobile . So to my mind the most important new technology is the Mobile .
Nowadays most of people have a mobile , but for new generation it's not a need but a way to be fashionable . Every young people want to have the new Blackberry or the new Iphone .It's convenient , customizable and changeable .
Moreover all phones have an Internet connection , so people can all be connected at every moment . One of the most important things with a mobile is the SMS . No need to call . It's fast , take less time and it is discreet . Other things : you can listen music . all a users need could be in his phone : Adress , music , games ...
The mobile is the most important new technology because it allows us to be connected at any time any place .
"be accustomed to doing sth" or "be accustomed to light etc"
ReplyDelete"most people have a mobile" "Every young teenager wants" "have Internet connection" "listen to music" "all you need is on your mobile" "address"